■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer |
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▶ Topic :
University students are
often encouraged to study fields in which a significant job growth (a large
increase in job opportunities) is expected ; these fields include science,
technology, engineering and math subjects. Do you believe students should consider
studying fields related to these subjects even if they are more interested in
other subjects? |
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▶ Your Answer :
Undoubtedly, study fields
play a significant role in people's daily lives in many of the places where
they play or work. Some people think that university students should consider
study fields in which a significant job growth such as science and technology,
but other think that students have to pursue studying fields related to their
interest. Both sides have their own reasons to support to their views. If I had
to choose one, I would say that university students should choose studying
fields which has a large increase in job openings.
The reason is that majoring
in demanding field is essential to live in life without risky situation in
today's uncertain society. Also, considering the fact that the importance of
fusion technology has grown recently, students can pursue their interest fields
based on the fields which can provide stable job positions. For instance, when
my cousin was in university, he wanted to be a singer. He felt that doing what
he like to do for the rest of his life was very important issue to him. He
majored in computer science but he wanted to become a famous dance singer like
Michael Jackson after participating in singing club. There was also his friend
thinking similar way to him. However, my mother advised him to continue his
career of computer science. They fought a lot, and he became a computer
scientist in Google who researchers a machine learning field. After a long
time, he realized that artificial intelligence can compose songs and produced
the composer machine. He sang the songs made by the machine, and became a
famous singer in the internet site named Youtube. Simultaneously, he earned a
lot of money from Google. On the other hand, his friend who continued to sing a
song became the poor and felt envious of my brother saying if he had chosen
promising jobs, he would have lived in stable condition. This implies that
doing what people like to do can betray themselves, so pursuing promising jobs
is the key to achieve greater success in life more than jobs they like to do.
Fortunately, people can still pursue their interest field based on the basic
fields such as science and technology as in the case of my cousin.
All in all, I firmly believe
that the advantage of choosing job fields which generate many jobs far
outweighs that of selecting fields people like to do.
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