■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer |
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▶ Topic : you agree or disagree that strict rules are helpful for children's education? |
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In today's society, Some people assert that strict rules are necessary for accomplishment of their children. Other people, however, believe that it is unnecessary to set a series of strict rules for their children. In these viewpoints, even though there are reasonable reasons to support their one's opinion, I want to suggest that there are no needs to educate their's children by setting strict rules for them for following reasons.
Frist of all, because it is evident that strict rules kill children's creativity. To explain it in detail, it clearly makes children to act unnaturally due to strict rules. According to the experiment conducted by Seoul National University in Korea, it proved that if parent do not allow their children thinking and acting freely, it brings them irreversible damages on their creativity. It added that strict rules makes their children to feel despondent because limited arrange of acting can bring negative effects on children's logic growing in fact.
Furthermore, becaus of strict rules, children can be predisposed to have a extremely low confidenci in their whole life. I have my childhood friend named Kyle, he was a sharp-witted boy and always did well in our class in elementary school. However, when we moved up to high school, one day Kyle said to me that their parents required him to study hard and do not play computer games until he passed Korea university. Since that time, Kyle could not play computer games and even went out to meet friends like me. As a matter of fact, Kyle lost his interesting to learning rapidly, as a friend, I thought it is an unreasonable desicion that Kyle's like was ruled by an unwanted stirct rules. Of coures, I still sorry to say that Kyle's
grade of college exam was not good in the end.
To sum up, I firmly believe that strict rules are not helpful for their children's education, it is even extremely bad for their lives. If we can let our children do think and act freely,so that they can catch two rabbits : creativity and confidency in their life.