▶ Your Answer :
The reading and the lecture both
talk about companies giving top priority to form strategies. The reading
states that there are three ways that bring benefits. However, the lecturer
argues that the methods given in the reading may bring some serious problems.
First of all, the reading states
that the first means is to that developing a new product by using the company's image can be helpful.
On the contrary, the lecturer argues that it is not beneficial to companies means is false. This is because it is
possible that a company can experience unexpected situation. For example, if motorcycles are developed by
a company which have good reputation about their cars is which does not specialize in good as their vehicles,
this company may drop their reputation.
Next, in the reading, the author
also gives a method to make a new version of an existing product, saying this can bring merits to companies. In contrast,
the lecturer claims that this way is erroneous. The reason for this is that
this According to the lecturer, this strategy can actually cause a company to lose its long-time loyal
customers.
Finally, the reading goes on to
show the third way that companies make a partnership with another company can bring benefits to companies. On
the other hand, the professor, in his lecture, asserts the idea that this
manner will not bring benefit to companies since it does not make sense. This is because forming
a partnership is very dangerous. For example, when the cooperation between two
companies is broken, one company can decide to develop a new product on their
own by stealing the other company's recipe.
Writing 0–30 score scale: Limited (1-16) / Fair (17-23) / Good (24–30)
ADDRESSING TOPIC
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ORGANIZATION
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PROGRESSION AND COHERENCE
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LANGUAGE USE
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GRAMMAR
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LIMITED
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LIMITED
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LIMITED
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FAIR
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FAIR
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각 카테고리별 SCORE: LIMITED / FAIR / GOOD
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- Reading 과 Lecturer 간 문장 내 대조점이 명료하게 보인다고 보기 어렵습니다. - reading passage를 그대로 copy 할 경우 progression 파트 등에서 감점이 있습니다. - 문법 실수가 반복적으로 나타납니다.
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