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Some people
might think the school grading system is an obstacle to students to study because it can make
students study only for their test. (위 두 문장은 합쳐주세요) However, in my
opinion, providing students with grades promotes learning. This is because
grades can be a motivation to students to study
hard and it can give students with evidence of academic progress.
To begin with,
students are stimulated to learn more by their
grades. When students receive good grades, they fill
could feel that the grade is a reward about their effort. It can make students to
study hard to get a better grade than before.
Plus, they often are encouraged to compete with each other to get great grades. For
example, when I was in middle school age,
I did not have any interest about science and really disliked science class. One day, I got a way more terrible grade of in the science exam than my expectation and also my friend. I was shocked. Since then, I studied
very hard to get a higher
grade than my friend and I managed to achieve it.
After I received high grade, I was so proud
about myself and study studied more to
get better grades. Now, science has becomes
one of my favorite subjects.
On top of that,
students can check their academic progress through grades. If there are were no grades, students could not would not have been able to determine how well they are doing in subjects, which require effort. They
also can make study plans efficiently based on their grades. For instance, according to the
research of Korean educators, students who take tests and receive grades tend
to make plans more systematically than other
students who do not take tests for receive
grades. The reason is that grades spur students to focus on subjects which they
do not well in. Therefore, they do not have
to time consuming study and will be able to concentrate
on specific subjects that they do poorly in.
To sum up, grades allow students to know about their
level on subjects and motivate them to learn more. In this regard, I agree with
the statement that school should provide grades to students to provoke
students’ best achievement.
Writing
0-30 Score Scale |
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18 |
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