▶ Your Answer : The lecturer argues that it is unclear that hammerhead shark has some specific evolutionary merits. This contradicts the reading passage's claim that its shape is so unique in the world of sharks that it must have some specific evolutionary merit. First of all, the speaker argues that it's unique head do not strengthen vision. the speaker maintains that it is only true that they could enhance their vision at the object of distant. Their drawbacks are that they can not see the object in front of them and can not avoid obstacle. This casts doubt on the reading which states that many experts believe that the unique structure of the head enhances vision. Because their eyes are located at each end of its wide and flat head, they are able to scan up and down. In addition, according to the speaker, they do not have high smell than other sharks. The speaker explains that there are no scientific study that they have a sense of smell better than other sharks. This refutes the reading passage's assertion that the shape of the shark's head also gives it a better sense of smell than other sharks and just as the hammerhead's eyes are spaced far apart, so are its nostrils. Final point made by the lecturer is that it is just wrong that their unique head shape offers opportunity for them to turn quickly. The speaker says that they do not use their head to steer, rather than it is real reason that their backbones are better flexible than other sharks. This rebuffs the reading passage's argument that their unique head shape allows the animal to turn quickly and scientists speculate that the wide, flat head acts like an airplane's wing.
점수: 27 지적할 부분이 없는 통합형 에세이입니다. 통합형 에세이에서 가장 중요한 부분을 차지하는 것은 한 주제에 대하여서 서로 다른 정보를 가지고 있는 리딩과 리스닝이 어떻게 비교하고 반박을 하는 것인지를 보는 것 입니다. 지금 이 에세이는 리딩과 리스닝이 구체적으로 자신의 주장이 무엇인지를 잘 보여주고 있습니다. 구체적인 예시와 적절한 설명들을 통하여서 한 주제에 대하여서 서로의 견해가 무엇인지를 잘 파악할 수 있었습니다. 수고많으셨습니다. |