▶ Your Answer : The
reading passage argues that as borer's larvae burrow into the wood of ash
tress, eventually destroy them. Fortunately, there are several methods to
resolve this challenge. The lecturer argues that the ways that can solve this
problem are not viable.
First
of all, the speaker argues that removing affected trees is not an effective
way. The speaker explains that the symtoms show about after 1~2 years.
Therefore that disease already spread other trees although people eliminate
affected trees. Also, this method is viable in urbane, however, the reagion
that has many trees is not possible. This casts doubt on the reading which the
states that one of the easiest ways is to simply remove the affected trees.
This can prevent the spread of these beetles to nearby healthy trees.
In addition, the method of a chemical
treatment gives negative effect. The speaker maintains that a groundwater are
polluted by a chemical. This rebuffs the reading passage's assertion that a
chemical treatment is another option to deal with the emerald ash borers. This
stops the adult borers fom laying their eggs and kills of larvae that are
already present.
The
final point made by the lecturer is that a solution of using biological pest
control has a lot of issue. The speaker says that parasitic wasps's survival
rate is depending on a region. In other worlds, they will not survive at cold
weather. Also it gives unintended consequence such as they ate other insects.
This refutes the reading passage's argument that releasing more of parasitic
wasps into the wild should significantly reduce the number of borders.
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