■ Direction You have 20 minutes to plan and write your response. Your response will be judged on the basis of The quality of writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and the relationship to the reading passage. Typically, an effective response will be 150 to 225 words. ■ Question Summarize the points made in the lecture you just heard, explaining how they cast doubt on the points made in the reading
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▶ Your Answer : While the author in the reading passage argues that Iceberg and the whale spotted are not the same individuals, the lecturer opposes the reading passage’s assertion with different views.
First of all, the professor contends that the claim about different color is flawed. The amount of sunshine and water temperature might change the skin color of whales. Yet, underneath skin color was unchanged. This goes against the reading passage’s argument that the color of the newly spotted adult is completely varied from that of the one uncovered in 2000.
Secondly, the professor points out that the assertion concerning the far distance around 1,500 miles is wrong. There are two types of Orcas whales, hunting type and fishing type, and fishing type can move around 2000 miles. So it is not too hard for them to move 1,500 miles. This call into question the reading passage’s argument that the distance between the spots is too far for a whale to trip along the coastal regions.
Finally, the professor argues that the opinion regarding fin’s size is mistaken. While it is correct that measuring the whale’s size then speculating their age, scientists could not examine accurately between 20 and 30 years old because the fins usually don’t grow from 20 years old. This contradicts the idea presented in the reading passage that it was similar in size between fins of whales first sighted in 2000 and some of the second sightings occurred in 2010, then they might not be the same whale.
점수: 27 지적할 부분이 없는 통합형 에세이입니다. 통합형 에세이에서 가장 중요한 부분을 차지하는 것은 한 주제에 대하여서 서로 다른 정보를 가지고 있는 리딩과 리스닝이 어떻게 비교하고 반박을 하는 것인지를 보는 것 입니다. 지금 이 에세이는 리딩이나 리스닝 둘 다 서로 구체적으로 자신들의 주장을 잘 보여주는 거 같습니다. 각 페시지의 구체적인 설명들을 통하여서 자신들의 견해가 무엇인지를 잘 보여주는 에세이인거 같습니다. 수고많으셨습니다. |
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문법이나 어휘에서 많이 부족하다는게 느껴집니다 ㅠㅠ
첨삭 감사드립니다!