▶ Your Answer : Some people believe that it is harmful for children to
play online games. There are obviously many opinions regarding this topic, it
is clear that playing the games is beneficial for children. The concept of
stress and career clearly show this theme.
First of all, playing computer games allow children to
alleviate stress. This is mainly because gaming can help them relax and clear
their mind. This bring a new solution to solve perplexing and stressful
problems at school. Therefore, playing such games is one of the best and most
effective ways to escape from the harsh reality. For example, when I was in
high school, one day, I was extremely exhausted and stressed due to excessive
homework. So, I called my friends and played a computer game called League of
Legend together. While enjoyed the game, I had a brief moment of relief from my
stressful schoolwork and could go back to the schoolwork with a lighter mind
after the game. This was because we cooperated and cheered for one another to
win, and shared the joy of victory
In addition, playing online games helpful for children’s
career. This is due to the fact that, if they work with others to solve
problems in the game, they will develop cooperative skills. As modern society
has become increasingly specialized, today’s companies are looking for
employees having such qualities. Therefore, these are important to fight for
jobs in highly competitive labor markets. For instance, my brother who used to spend
time to play computer games rather than to study, is the example of it. When he
first started to play the online game, he was a kind of person who is inpatient
and stubborn so that it was so hard for him to work with others. However, since
he started the online game which was called Overwatch needed close
communication with others, he has changed little by little. He tried to listen
to others and became more socialized. As the result, amazingly, he could enter the
popular Korean Company, Samsung, as a salesman in recognition of his social
skills. As he said, the reason he tried to change himself was that he felt need
to work with others to win the game.
(body 2가 좀 긴감이 있고, samsung이 뜬금없이 나오긴 하는데...이부분은 제외하는게 나을까요?)
In conclusion, it seems to me that it is beneficial
for kids to play PC games. The example of stress and employment support the
argument. |