It is evident that in our society, television has a tremendous importance
in our lives. Some people think that television is more effective if it is used
to instruct people rather than entertain them, while others do not. I however,
believe that television should be used to entertain people. There are several
reasons to support my argument. So, I will limit to the two the most relevant
to the topic: the concept of role and effectiveness.
First of all, the most
important reason for my thinking this way is that television usually plays a
role of entertaining family members. Most of families have their own television
at home and place it in living room. That is because living room is the most
proper place where every family member get together for talking and enjoying
their life. Television contributes to the family by providing fun and enjoyable
programs. Many families make themselves fun with their television. If television
only had provided educational programs, families would have had less chance to
laugh together.
Another reason why I
think this way is that television is appropriate medium to provide entertaining
contents to people. Compared with book and newspapers, television is better at
making people entertained because the television is able to provide colorful
contents, which move with catching sounds. Different kinds of contents such as
movies, comedies, or soup dramas can be provided via the television. Take my
friend, Ki-sub, for example. He is a big fan of TV show infinite challenges. He
rarely smiles and laughs because he failed many times to obtain his job.
However, whenever he talked about the TV show, he shows me his smile to me.
Without the television, he would have been made a sad face all day.
In conclusion, I believe
that television is more effective when people use it as an entertainment device
for reasons such as role and effectiveness. All things considered, with the
reasons mentioned above, I believe that I have sufficiently and adequately
explained my position on the matters regarding the topic.
첨삭해 주시는 선생님들 항상 감사합니다.
이 주제는 너무 어렵네요.
A 또는 B 해야만 한다라고 하니, 브레인스토밍이 너무 어렵고 논리를 작성하기가 많이 어려운 것 같습니다. 이런 경우는 어떻게 하면 되는지 팁 같은게 있을까요?