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We often watch the news to know worldly affairs, to find new
information, or even to get some topic of cheap talk with our friends. When you
find the look for news, do you have any
basis of the selecting news for it? Some
people think that the news media is are a
reliable source of unbiased information. However, it isn't true. We have to
know that the media can be controlled by social or political situations and each media has have
the an oriented tendency. (media = plural noun)
To begin with, the media is are easily
controlled via social or political situations. Basically, it is they are the molding opinion institutions. For this reason, it they
usually selects information what that
has been issued recently. And it transmits they
transmit the information to the public. Moreover, under some specific political
situations, it is they are commended by the specific group. For example, in the 1980s, Korean news medias were held by the Korean government.
They had a guidance of announcement to be sent by the government. And they had
to announce the news what biased to the government friendly that were friendly to the government’s image and purpose.
Last but not least, each news media has have
the oriented characteristics. Almost the Most
news media can be divided to the conservative
side or the progressive side. They illustrate
any issued information to so in different
ways. For instance, when they handle the tax
policy, if one side appear shows their
positive reaction about the policy, contrarily, the other side would emphasize
the concerning point of the policy.
To sum up, the news media can select information, and usually have
oriented points. In this regard, I think that
the news media is are not reliable sources of unbiased information. And if you want to get some
information, you should recognize characteristics
of the media previously, and should consider it them.
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Comment: |
포인트는 잘 잡았지만, 전체적으로
문법 오류가 매우 많아서 흐름이 끊기고 뜻을 파악하기가 어려운 점이 있습니다. 위 지적사항들을 참고하세요. |
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