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There might be some people who think that expressing teacher’s personal opinion in classroom is not a big deal. They even say that this helps students learn more about politics a great deal. However, I personally disagree with the above idea for the three subsequent reasons. First, this is dangerous because students are susceptible to any opinion given by others. Second, it can cause some serious school issues. Third, it is a waste of classroom time.
First, students absorb any opinions that the teacher mentions makes in the classroom. To young students, the teacher is seen as an adult who knows everything and who makes the right decisions. Therefore, students believe the words of a teacher to be all true, instead of judging the teacher’s opinion beforehand. This can cause students to build one-sided view regarding social and political issues.
Second, it is dangerous to show a teacher’s personal view because it can cause a big controversy later. Political and social issues should be carefully dealt with because everyone has different opinions. Consequently, there are some situation when the parents of a student have has a very different thought from that of the teacher’s. Let me bring up my personal story as an example. When I was a young student, there was a social studies teacher who had a strong belief. (In what?) Not only did she believe that she was right, but she always tried to convince everyone that what she believed was right. This was just a simple opinion nuisance until one angry parent came to school, saying that our social studies teacher get punished for planting putting wrong ideas to students. As it was discovered later, that parent was the politician that the teacher believed to be idiotic. (Unnatural) The teacher was not kicked out, but this dispute disrupted my school for years. As one can see in this episode, expressing the teacher’s opinion can later cause a big scene for the school as a total.
Third, it is a waste of class time. It is a duty of a teacher to teach students objective facts. Saying personal preferences in class time goes against the duty of a teacher. Teachers should try their best to use class time efficiently, which means they should give objective knowledge to students to the full extent at their full extent.
In conclusion, teachers should try not to teach students their personal opinion because of the characteristic of students, serious school problem it can become and the abuse of class time. For these reasons, I think that one should try to pass students facts only.
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