▶ Your Answer :
In
current media-dominated society, to determine the purpose of television as
educational or entertaining is important. Ssome might say that TV contains too
many colorful entertaining entertaing programs like music and sports, which makes it hard for students to study. However, these aspects make television televison more effective to use it as a studying material.
Granted, television televison is a fancy tool to help visual learning. TV can display colorful and
realistic features of the subjects that they want to explain about. Therefore
they can attract interest from the viewers. Take a Discovery channel as an
example. Many students and even adults around the world learn about the earth,
history, science and space by watching Discovery channel. They provide
realistic and interesting form of knowledge that books cannot convey. Books tends to contain contatin boring passages and many equations so that makes which cause readers to lose loss their interest after they read a few pages. However, the interesting and
live materials on in TV help to understand easily easly and to stimulate people them to study more with after the program.
Furthermore, Furhtermore,
TV is convenient convinient to access in anywhere, any time. Modern people spend a lot of
time watching TV. No one tells tolds them to watch TVtv and spend a time with it like
studying. However, people automatically watches TV without contributing any
efforts. Therefore Therfore studying with TV can be a suitable opitions to a student who does not doesnt like to study with strict atmosphere. It is possible poosible that students who
might not like to study with pressure would prefers to study in much convenient convinient
atmosphere like in a sofa. Thus we can convey the knowledge knoweldges with out without give pressure press them
with strict atmosphere in desk. Also we can save a lot of time with TV
education. We can do other things like having dinner during while we watch TV. As a
result, we can save time by doing several jobs in at the same time. tiime.
In
conclusion, wWe should use TV with educational purposes because it is very convenient convinent, and interesting and we can save time. times. However, we should further
investigate more on how to make people more concentrate on TV while they
studying.
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