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Some people may say that it
is essential to take a course such as art and music in school along with other
subsects like sicence, math, and history. However, I have a different idea. I
firmly believe that students do not need to take class of music and art as
requirement course. There are two reasons to support my assertions.
To begin with, School does
not require students to have art and music as compulsory subject along with
other subjects because they can receive stress greatly. Demanding students to
take art class can make them stress out enormously. This means that if students
have to study additional subjects, they would spend much time learning others,
which lead to burden of academic. For example, I have a nephew Tom who is 11
year old. A few days ago, I had chance to hear his daily schedule from his
mother. She said that he went to private academy of art and even music every
day after school, and come to home at 11 PM. This fact made me surprised. His
mother told me that in South Korea his schedule is a typical one compared
others. I questioned whether Tom's life is happy or not. Actually, when I asked
him about healthy and feeling, he mentioned he had hard time living in life
because of additional course.
Second, students do not need
to have other courses like art with history and math class since art course is
generally not helpful for them to get a job in the future. Regardless of
professional musicians and artists, music class is not a indispensable factors
to working in company. For instance, many companies want to hire workers who
have practical knowledge and skill that to utilize real workplace. The students
who receive more education of utilitarian course such as math and science are
likely to get a job easily. Even though music help people to relieve stress or refresh
themselves, in reality, students would need essential subjects in order to make
use of real life. Therefore, Students should not have music and art class
compulsorily along with other subjects.
To sum up, because taking music and art class cause students to get more stress
and those do not help students to get a job, students do not need to take music
and art courses. Therefore, I strongly believe that it is not beneficial for
students to take unnecessary courses.
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