▶ Your Answer : Some people might say that parks are the essential places. However, in my opinion, the government should decease its spending on the parks. There are two reasons. First, these days, residents hardly go to the parks. Second, the facilities in the parks might be dangerous for children as time goes by. ^ To begin with, in the current world, individualism is prevalent all around the globe. They no longer want to go to the public places like parks. People who like to exercise exercies buy their own exercising facilities at homes. Also, as global warming is getting serious, mothers do not let their children go out and play games. Instead, they tend to bring their children to an inside places where they can play sports and run. For example, there was a survey conducted by education majors with 200 residents. The purpose of the survey was to understand their thoughts about using parks. The majority of the respondents replied that they do not need parks anymore. An overwhelming 60% responded that they seldom use the facilities in the parks near the place they live in. They also added that they want the government to build another facility or building with the money which will be used for improvement of park. This survey shows that a park is no longer necessary for the community and a waste of money. ^ On top of that, facilties in parks can be dangerous to children. These facilities are usually made up of a metal. So after acid rain is pouring down from the sky, they might corrode quickly. And in the case of children getting injured, it can cause a serious skin illness. I will talk about my experience as an example to elucidate my point. When I was an elemantary school student, I liked to spend most of my free time exercising with my friends in the park near my new apartment. I thought the equipments in the park were strong because I did not notice that they were very old. After a couple of months, I got a serious skin problem and had to stop going to the park. The doctor said the corrosion of a metal is fatal to the skin especially for the young. ^ To sum up, a park is not necesary for the people at present due to individualism. Also, sports equiptments in parks can be a hazard for those who are vulnerable to diseases. In this regard, I think government should decrease its spending on parks.
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