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Some people think that we do not have to know current issues of today's world because most of them are not related to our life. However in my opinion, even if most events in the world do not have influence directly on us, we have to be aware of them. This is because, knowing the world events help interact with many people and diverse knowledge are needed to survive in this world. To begin with, tThe meaning of success has completely changed compared to the past. If it was merely to focus on one's own way now it is to be recognized by others and having followers. For example, a study was conducted by the Gallup Organization to determine whether the events around the world could affect one's relationship. The researchers tracked the habit of 300 people over a 3 year period. What they found was intriguing. Among the 300 people, those who knew various world events got along well with a lot of people. The reason was that they could share what they knew about world events. This proves that being aware of many events is useful for our human relationship. On top of that, to survive in this world of endless competition people ought to have a wide variety of knowledge rather than having deep knowledge about one specific field. One's ability can be clouded by other's abilities so in order to stand out, people should show one's own strength clearly. For example, I will talk about my past experience to elucidate my point. When I interviewed for my intern, there were many people in the company and they were all smart and competent people. So I was really nervous. In the interview, we were asked about today's economy and most of them could not answer properly. However since I had read newspaper and internet news regularly I was able to answer the question. Finally I passed the internship. This all account for the importance of knowing diverse events. Through this experience, it is helpful to know current issues of the world. In a nutshell, taking the human relationship and the competition with other people into consideration, there are a lot of advantages of knowing world events. In this regard, I firmly believe that it is important to be interested with world events.
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