▶ Your Answer : It would be very difficult to imagine the world without the Internet now. The advent of the new technology has made our lives change in numerous aspects. When it comes to education, I firmly believe that students can benefit from the enormous information which is readily accessible and easier communication via the Internet.
Above all, thankful for the Internet students can access tremendous information very conveniently. In other words, students do not have to go to a library and read all the books in order to find what they need. The Internet made it possible to search the data all over the world by one click. For instance, when I have some unclear concepts from studying, I can make use of the Internet search engine such as Google and Wikipedia. Sometimes I found that someone else had an exactly same question as me and there were some possible answers and discussions from people on the Internet. In order to reach more reliable information, I can visit the online library of the university and go through the online database and other related materials there. Also there are plenty of internet lectures available from a world famous educational institutes. As a result, students can obtain much more and better information with the help of advanced technology compared to the students of the past.
What’s more, the Internet has made all the communication much easier and faster. At times, Internet search is not enough to answer my questions perfectly. In that case, we could rely on a human help just like the past. As a matter of fact, students can take advantage of the Internet in terms of better communication with teachers. To be specific, even when the professor was away from school due to the conference overseas, he was still able to answer my questions through email and give me some helpful links as well. One of the courses I took at first year of university had online bulletin board so that whenever students had any question, they could ask and the professor or teaching assistant replied as soon as possible. Personally, talking in online is way more comfortable than in person as well. Therefore, I think the Internet offers more favorable and effective study environment for students. Of course, how effectively students make use of the Internet for their studying is up to each student’s capability. However in general, it seems obvious that students can save their valuable time with the aid of the Internet. In this regard, I approve of the idea that the Internet made students’ studying more effectively.
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