■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer |
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▶ Topic : Do you agree or disagreee with the statement? There is no better way to get to know a country than by going to museums. |
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▶ Your Answer :There might be some people who believe that there is no better way to get to know a country than by going to museums. However, I personally disagree with the above idea for two subsequent reasons. To begin with, I think travelling is more efficient to learn about new countries. To be specific, if we go to a trip to the country, we get to actually see and feel the place in various aspects. This is something we can't learn about in museums, reading the explanation about remains. For example, let's say you want to study England. Planning a trip to England includes searching for background knowledge, and making routes for your trip. Moreover, you can sign up for a tour guide, which can help you learn about England's history while actually being there. All of this process would help you get to know about England in overall. On top of that, museums usually provide information about the past. This is because museums only show historical parts of the country. Since knowing a country well doesn't mean knowing the history of it, going to museums is not the best idea to understand a country. Let me bring up my personal story as an example. Before visiting Japan, I thought I would not like Japan because of the hostile relaionship that Japan and Korea had for a long time. By going to various museums, I knew Japan was very hostile to Korea. However, I found out that Japaneese were very friendly and kind to me, even though they knew the fact that I was Korean. Through this experience, I could learn that history is not all that counts. In conclusion, visiting the country is more effective to know about a country, and museums have limited information of the country's present. In this regard, I believe that there are better ways to get to know a country than going to museums.
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