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Those who disagree might say that people pay
enough attention to the larger things. However, in my opinion, nowadays people
are too focusing on less important matters to be able to gain valuable things.
One reason is that their priority in lifestyle is convenience. Another reason
is that they tend to extremely consider other’s views.
To begin with, in this hectic world, a lot
of people fail to have a healthy diet since they want to work fast. To save
time, most workers do not eat nutritious home-made food which requires
relatively a longtime preparation. Instead, their first choice is almost the fast
which is too fatty and salty or sweet or so convenient. For example, there was
a survey conducted by government’s health department, with 200 workers as
respondents. The purpose of the survey was to find out the reason of the high
obesity rate among them. An overwhelming 85% responded that they ear prepared
food at least twice a day due to their busy schedule although they know it is
not helpful to stay fit. This survey proves that the pursuit of a convenient
life leads people to get a health problem.
On the top of that, young people have more
interest in their appearance than inner growth as they are too much conscious
of others. To be specific, while they spend a lot of energy to look good, they
do not take time to be a good person for reading. As a result, they lose
opportunities to fill a brain with knowledge and wisdom. For instance, I will talk
about my cousin and his friend to elucidate my point. In the case of my cousin,
he is interested in the thing he could do to make him mature. Unlike my cousin,
his friend never reads any books. She wastes time on shopping clothes to be
attractive and does not study at all. After university graduation, she does not
succeed in getting a job due to lack of a basic knowledge. However, my cousin
always tries to acquire diverse information and expert knowledge to be a judge.
Thanks to his attitude focusing on his goal, he achieves his dream. This shows
how important it is to concentrate on what makes our life improved.
In conclusion, health can be disregarded by
people who stick to easy life. Also, the chances for self-development are not
given when people seek only their external beauty. With those reasons, I agree
with the claim that people cannot see more critical matters owing to too much
attention on small things.
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