▶ Your Answer :
A person who plans well and work carefully is more likely to succeed than a person who takes risks. Some people think that person who plans well and work carefully is more likely to succeed that a person who takes tasks. However, in my opinion, getting risks need people in this world for the following few reasons. First of all, nowadays population is more and more than last few centuries. Therefore facing to competition is inevitable when they live in this world. To survive in this world of endless competition, people ought to take risks. Everyone is aware that being successful by taking risky works is a like camel passing through the eye of a needle nowadays. But, one's ability can be clouded by other's abilities so in order to stand out people must get risk. For example, when I was in high school, I wanted to enroll the college, Seoul National University. However, the university requires a subject that is Korean History and I did not well this subject. Although I did not have confidence, I need doing it because I want to enroll this college. Eventually, I got the perfect score in this subject, I enrolled the school. Second, many people want to know who get the successful life in this work where there person who plans well and work carefully and who takes risks. Thus, a study was conducted by Harvard Human Medical Center whether taking risky works could get more successful like than taking work carefully. There are two groups monitored. The first group is consisted of people who got the risky works. And they were asked to take tests to measure their level of quality of life. The other group was formed of people who take carefully works and given the same direction. The researcher compared the outcomes and recorded that the former groups lies on high quality life than the latter group. This is because high risk, high return to them. This study demonstrate that when people get high risk they could more opportunity to get successful life. To sum up, in this world population is so higher than last few centuries so people need to prepare to competition and need being stand out. In this regard, I think that people get more risky works that can gives back to high returns for the I mentioned above. |