■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer |
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▶ Topic : | Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Citizens should not pay public transportation fees. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. |
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▶ Your Answer :
| Some people think that citizens should not pay transportation fees. In my opinion, I agree with the statement. I think people should not pay transportation fees because it will reduce the traffics and give economic benefits to individuals.
| First, providing free public transportation would result in less traffic on the roads, This is because more people would take the transportation rather that driving their cars as driving would then be much more expensive. Studies have shown that free transit has been successful in cities that have implemented it. In one case, public transit increased by over 15 percent, while the percentage of cars on the road decreased by nearly the same amount.This results show that offering free transit can help reduce traffic.
| Second, providing free public transportation would result in economical benefit to individuals. This is because people can save their money if the the transportation fee is free. If they save money they can do beneficial things like eating good foods, using their money on academic studies and on health care activities. |
| In conclusion, free public transit would produce positive results, such as reduced traffic and economic benefits for individuals. For these reasons, I believe that people should not pay public transportation fees for the reasons I mentioned above. |
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