▶ Your Answer : The
reading passage argues that as borer's larvae burrow into the wood of ash
tress, eventually destroy destroying them. Fortunately, there are several methods to
resolve this challenge. The lecturer argues that the ways that can solve this
problem are not viable.
First
of all, the speaker argues that removing affected trees is not an effective
way. The speaker explains that the symptoms show about after 1~2 years.
Therefore that the disease already spread to other trees although people eliminate
affected trees. Also, this method is viable in urbane, however, it is not possible in the reagion
that has many trees is not possible. This casts doubt on the reading which the
states that one of the easiest ways is to simply remove the affected trees.
This can prevent the spread of these beetles to nearby healthy trees.
In addition, the method of a chemical
treatment gives negative effect. The speaker maintains that a groundwater are
polluted by a chemical. This rebuffs the reading passage's assertion that a
chemical treatment is another option to deal with the emerald ash borers. This
stops the adult borers from laying their eggs and kills of larvae that are
already present.
The
final point made by the lecturer is that a solution of using biological pest
control has a lot of issue. The speaker says that parasitic wasps's survival
rate is depending depends on a region. In other worlds, they will not survive at cold
weather. Also it gives unintended consequence such as they ate the possibility they might eat other insects.
This refutes the reading passage's argument that releasing more of parasitic
wasps into the wild should significantly reduce the number of borders.
예상 점수: 17-21 총평: 글은 무난하게 통합형에 맞게 강의와 본문을 비교해서 써주셨으나, 어법상 어색한 표현들이 지나치게 많습니다. 문장을 쓰기 전에 문장에 어떠한 내용을 쓰시려고 했던건지 먼저 명확하게 생각을 하신 후에 쓰시는게 좋을 것 같아요. 수고 많으셨습니다. |