■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer |
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▶ Topic : The extended family is not as important now as before. |
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▶ Your Answer :
To start the argument, the extended family
allows individual to reduce and prevent from receiving stress. Many consider
that the extended family may cause emotional consumption because of the number
of family members. However, individuals may avoid loneliness by living
together, which causes more serious problems such as stress and depression
which are prevalent in the modern society. For example, when I first entered college,
I had to live by myself. I have felt loneliness which I never felt before. Due
to the reason, I have gained a lot of stress and suffered from depression.
After I graduated the school, I lived with my parents, brother, and
grandparents again. Now I feel cozy and comfortable. On top of that, the extended family enables
individuals to improve their social relationship and social skills. It is undeniable
that the extended family offers opportunities to socialize and create kinship
with others. In supporting my view, according to a
recent poll conducted at a renowned research center, 78 percent of participants
claimed that individuals who have grown in the extended family tend to have
more ability to get along with others.
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서론, 결론 빼고 본론만 작성하였습니다. 참고 부탁드려요^^
감사합니다.