▶ Your Answer :Some people think that companies' products are not necessary to advertise their products on in TV programs since there are various ways to show them such as newspaper. However, in my opinion, it is better to advertise the products on TV for the two subsequent reasons. To begin with, a product on TV has high quality of access to public. (What does it mean?) In modern society, most people have televisions in their home. Due to a number of people who have television, the stuffs showed on TV gain great ability of access, therefore, they are able to be recognized better. (Unclear grammar structure) Thus, this aspect will help companies advertise goods well. There was a poll conducted by an advertisement center (What's that?) with people as respondents. The purpose of the survey was to understand the better method to advertise things. The majority of people replied that they usually bought products that they saw on TV. The reason mainly concerned with it was products on TV were easily noticed by public. This showed that a stuff in television programs has good accessibility to public. On the top of that, consumers have more desire to buy goods on in TV. (Not enough for thesis) Imagine that favorable drama figures or movie stars use a specific products on a in television program. People will be likely to follow them by utilizing the same product. So, the number of public who acquire the product will increase and the company will flourish. To take my case/experience myself as an example, I enjoyed watching to watch a drama whose title was " Look at my eyes". It had a romantic story which l like and I drastically fell in love to the main character. During In the drama, he used a notebook several times. I really want to buy it. Though I didn't need to earn it, I bought a lot. This indicates that people are willing to buy a product due to the specific figure on in TV. To sum up, considering a significant level of access of television and high desire for a product which is employed by a figure on in TV, I firmly believe that companies have to be permitted to advertise their goods in television programs.
채점기준표 | Grammar | Contents | Example | Coherence | 점수 | 2 | 2
| 2 | 2 | Score | Limited 10-17 | - Agree 의 입장을 할 때에도, 회사의 입장만 아니라 Ads를 보는 시청자에게도 이익이 되는 점을 명시하시는 것이 설득력이 있습니다.
- High quality인지 Access인지 정하여 주세요. - In TV가 아닌 On TV로 정정하여 주세요. - 제시된 두 주장의 내용이 미흡하거나, 명료하지 않습니다.
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