▶ Your Answer :
In the reading passage, there is ample support for the author’s claim that the hammer head shape have a specific evolutionary merit. However, the professor in the lecture gives several reasons as a rebuttal to the author’s claim. First, the professor contends that the structure of hammer head does not enhance vision. The hammer head’s wide space eyes give good depth perception only when the object is distinctive. Also, they have blind spot which is problem to identify and catch the prey. This casts doubt on the reading passage’s claim that hammer head can help enhance vision. So they can see the same object. Next, the professor insists that the better sense of smell is not a merit of hammer head. Other sharks can smell as well as hammer sharks. For example, white shark can detect a single drop of blood. This counters the reading passage’s assertion that hammer head gives it a better sense of smell rather than other sharks. Finally, the professor argues that hammer head shark’s rapid turn is not result of their shape of head. In the video tape, the shark do not use their head. Instead, they use their backbones to steering. So they can turn quickly. This refutes the reading passage’s suggestion that they can steer one direction or other direction with small movements since their head shape is so unique.
예상 점수: 27-30 총평: 크게 하자 없이 무난하게 글을 잘 써주신 것 같습니다. 다만 자잘한 실수들이 몇 군데 존재합니다. The를 사용하시는 경우는 이미 언급된 사물 앞에 붙임으로써 그 사물임을 명확하게 지칭할 때 사용합니다. 또 they라는 다수를 지칭하는 대명사를 써주셨을 경우에는 마찬가지로 their backbones로 다수를 지칭해주셔야 합니다. 수고 많으셨습니다. |