▶ Your Answer :
The reading and the lecturer both told
about whether or not Anglo-Saxons is ancestor of the English people. The
reading argued the origins of the English people is Anglo-Saxons with three
reasons. However, the lecturer disagreed with that opinion. He said the reasons
suggested by the reading are weak.
First, the reading said a mass migration of
Anglo-Saxons caused Anglo-Saxons to displace the Celtic population. The lecturer
said it might have been too hard because population of Celtic was quite huge
than Anglo-Saxons.
Secondly, the reading stated that the language
of England was derived from the Anglo-Saxons. In the contrary, the lecturer
cast a doubt on this reason because there was a historical record that a
country Just adopted a language of invading country without being displaced
population.
Finally, the last reason of the reading is
the DNA profiles of some people living in England were identical to the
profiles of the contemporary people whose ancestors may be Anglo-Saxons.
However, the lecturer said the DNA samples represented only people of limited
regions of England so that the results couldn't be a proof.
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