▶ Your Answer : These days, majority of people are cultured such as going to theater and or watching a movie. and Therefore, it is common to be exposed by movies. Some people think that movies tell a lot about a country. However, I strongly believe that these advanced digital products do not convey a information about specific country because people do not care the origin of countries when they watch a movie and some movies include wrong data about a country. First of all, most of people merely focus on characters in the movie. To be specific, people do not matter care about the stories that movies are trying to give messages to audiences. Background of movie just makes people to understand about the movie. Lots of people usually remember a story or special character in the movies, but they do not recall which country the characters were there. For example, I watched a France French movie because my favorite actor was participated, not in order to listen about traits of France. After I watched a the movie, I could only remember what he said. Therefore, movies concentrate on making good stories and the point is that movies do not think deeply about a particular country. On top of that, movies can deliver inaccurate information about a country to people. This is because if movies prefer to convey various things about a country, they should create a movie perfectly. However, majority of movies have some data that is not true and people just enjoy the movie that they have made. For instance, I heard that some Hollywood movies involves scenes that have to shoot in other country such as Asia but moviemakers just make areas similar to that country instead of going to there directly. Of course, they made their own scenes that I had never seen that places in my country. Thus, movies may want to make their films more beautiful, not for a country’s own traits. To sum up, people do not take into consideration whether the movie tells a country or not and movies can have different information from its origin. In this regard, I firmly believe that movies do not tell a lot about countries. 예상 점수: 17-21 총평: 우선 어법상 안 맞는 표현이 많습니다. 동사나 단어를 선택하실 때 조금 더 그 상황에 적합한 단어를 사용하시는게 좋을 것 같아요. 뜻이 유사한 단어라 하더라도 사용하는 때와 의미가 다른 경우가 있는데 사전을 사용하시거나 찾아보셔서 조금 더 명확하게 사용하시는게 좋을 것 같아요. 또 traits라는 단어는 무슨 의미로 사용하신지 몰라서 하이라이트 해놨습니다. 수고 많으셨습니다. |