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Some people thinks that it is a better choice for young people to follow their parents’ field when they choose their jobs. However, I believe that it is more important to find their own field that they are really interested in. Therefore, I disagree with this statement above for two reasons.
To begin with, everyone is born with their own interest and talent. Even though they have their own talent, if they choose their job in the same field as their parents, they will waste their time. For instance, my grandfather has been operated a furniture factory for a long time. So, my father took over his business. Although he wanted to be a policeman officer, he selected his job in the same field as his father. Sometimes he talked to me about this story and told me that “Live a life without regret”. With this reason, i disagree with this opinion above.
Furthermore, even though their parents could make their field successful in their time, it might not guarantee their success. It might be possible that their parents’ field out of date. Every field’s value changes according to the times. To be specific, one of my friends manages a Korean traditional rice-cake shop which was inherited by his parents. However, many young people prefer a bread to a rice-cake. Even though the rice-cake shop was pretty famous in his parents’ day, it was not easy to make a profit for managing the shop as the same way. Therefore, the statement above cannot be supportive. To sum up, I disagree with the statement that it is more better choice to follow their parents’ field, when they choose their jobs. People should find their own talent when they choose their jobs. In addition, although their parents had a made great achievement in their field, nothings guarantee their success as the same way.
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