■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer |
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▶ Topic : Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship. |
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▶ Your Answer :
Some people think that always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship. However, in my opinion, there are more important things to think when we are talking with others. It can be said that always telling the truth is not so essential in speaking explained by following these two reasons.
To begin with, there are several points that are more important than telling the truth. One of that things is tone of voice. For example, when I‘m going to tell my one of my friends about the assignment that he forgot, I would tell him with normal tone, not funny tone. If I talk about assignment what he completely forgot on funny tone, he can feel anger to me although I just wanted to remind him. As a result, I told the truth, but without suitable tone, listener cannot understand what I really meant. Therefore, truth is not the best point in conversations.
On top of that, telling the truth is not always helpful for us. Suppose that one of your friends told you that do you think she is fat, and you think it is true. To tell just the truth, you should reply “Yes” on that question, but this reply can make relation between you and your friend worse. You can tell her she is pretty enough, but with some exercise and diet, she can be even more beautiful girl. Maybe it is quite easy to caught it is lie, but although she knows it is lie, she can think you are kind and thoughtful person. This case shows us that telling the truth is not always the best way to improve any relationship.
In conclusion, telling the truth is not most important consideration in every relationship. First, there are several more important things that speakers have to consider like tone, and second, telling the truth is not good for some relationships such as example that I mentioned. Therefore, telling the truth is less important than other significant considerations.
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적다보니 2번째 문단부턴 살짝 오프토픽인 것 같은데, 어떻게 적어야할지 모르겠어요. 최상급이냐 아니냐를 묻는 질문에서는 근거를 어떻게 두 개를 들고 와야하나요? 저는 이 질문에선
1. 그거보다 더 좋은 것도 있다
2. 딱히 그게 좋은 것만도 아니다
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