■ Direction You have 20 minutes to plan and write your response. Your response will be judged on the basis of The quality of writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and the relationship to the reading passage. Typically, an effective response will be 150 to 225 words. ■ Question Summarize the points made in the lecture you just heard, explaining how they cast doubt on the points made in the reading
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▶ Your Answer : The reading and the lecturer both talk about whales lying helplessly on the beach. The reading argued there are several ways to explain why some wales stranded on the beach. However, the lecturer disagreed with that opinion by manifesting three reasons.
First, the reading said whales stranded because of wind patterns. Some wind blows from far ocean to land and makes stream in that direction. And whales follow that stream because the stream contains a great number of fishes they can eat. The lecturer said it cannot explain all of these stranding. Winds make current in sea from land to far ocean, and in this case, it cannot be good explanation.
Secondly, the reading stated that whales which have illness came ashore, with example that many of whales lying on the beach are already dead when they wash up on beach. In contrast, the lecturer casts a doubt on this reason because most of the whales are not dead or sick. It is often that volunteers help the whales that came up on the beach to go back to the ocean.
Finally, the last reason of the reading is disorientation. Whales which are not able to detect the gentle sloped coastlines near beaches swim too close to shore and became stranded. However, the lecturer said it is completely not true. If it is correct explain, whales which lives nearby beach have to stranded on the beach in thinking commonly, but it is not.
점수: 27 some whales라고 바꿔서 설명하여도 좋습니다. 지금 이 통합형 에세이는 지적할 부분이 없는 거 같습니다. 통합형 에세이에서 가장 중요한 부분을 차지하는 것 중에 하나는 한 주제에 대하여서 서로 다른 정보를 가지고 있는 리딩과 리스닝이 어떻게 비교하고 반박하는 지를 보는 것 입니다. 지금 이 에세이 같은 경우는 리딩이나 리스닝 둘 다 자신이 어떠한 부분에서 무엇을 비교하고자 하는지를 잘 보여주는 거 같습니다. 잘 서술하였습니다. 수고많으셨습니다.
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Some of the whales 라고 쓸 것을 전부 some wales로 바꿔서 썼는데, 좋은 판단인가요?