■ Direction You have 20 minutes to plan and write your response. Your response will be judged on the basis of The quality of writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and the relationship to the reading passage. Typically, an effective response will be 150 to 225 words. ■ Question Summarize the points made in the lecture you just heard, explaining how they cast doubt on the points made in the reading
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▶ Topic : Teenagers are more influenced by their friends than anyone else. |
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▶ Your Answer :
Some people think that friends
do have best influence on adolescence. However, in my opinion, there are other
people who can give greater effect than friends. They can be families and
celebrities for the following reasons.
To begin with, family can
give influence teenagers more than their friends do. We obviously know the fact
that how much do people give attention and love someone is closely concerned
with how much do people give influences on someone. Also, friends nevertheless give
a lot of love and attention, love and attention from friends can not be compared with family’s concerns.
For example, my parents are always stay on my side regardless of situation,
since they always believe me and love me. So they can be the most influencer in
my high school life. If friends are at the same situation, they could often not
at my side, as they are always be the third person in the situation.
On top of that, young
people tend to be affected greatly by celebrities. In adolescence, they would have
much interesting to figures on television, so they tend to try to emulate
celebrities on television. We do not usually imitate our
friends, so it is clear that celebrities have more significant impact than
friends on adolescence. Take the example of my friend who is in high school and
very interested in the celebrity. She usually imitates what he did, and her
hobby which takes the bulk of her daytime is stalking him. My friend always buy
something that he once advertised. She even says that he is the reason of her
life.
To sum up, friends is not
the most considerable factors in adolescence’s life
because of families who are most reliable people, and celebrities who could
readily have acquaintance on television. For these reasons, I firmly believe
that friends are not the important people when it comes to the young people’s life. |
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