■ Direction You have 20 minutes to plan and write your response. Your response will be judged on the basis of The quality of writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and the relationship to the reading passage. Typically, an effective response will be 150 to 225 words. ■ Question Summarize the points made in the lecture you just heard, explaining how they cast doubt on the points made in the reading
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▶ Topic : Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television has destroyed communication among friends and family. |
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▶ Your Answer : As television has developed, it has brought many changes to our society. Of course, there are advantages and disadvantages of television. However, I think television gives people an opportunity to socialize and communicate with their friends and families. To begin with, many popular TV shows are becoming starring role of our communication. In South Korea, music programs are the most popular among the 20s. BTS, TWICE, and other musicians are the theme of the younger's conversation. A few years ago, I was not interested in the TV shows, so I had a difficulty having a conversation with my friends about musicians. I thought I had to watch these shows. After only a few months, I could communicate with my friends. TV programs were really helpful in making new friends and socializing with someone. Recently, if someone doesn't know about the latest TV dramas or programs, he or she may not be able to hang out with some friends. In this regard, Television has a role of improving relationships with people. Not only only TV shows or dramas have an important role, but also news program has an important function. I am a member of a discussion club at my school. Our members talk about the week's issue in our community every weekend. We collect the information about an issue from TV news show. Of course, we could gather them from the Internet or Radio, but TV news show can deliver many issues in more detailed form. From the collected information, we share our ideas and present new solutions about our community's problems. As a member of discussion club, I can have an opportunity to socialize with others, and broaden my perspectives. If there were no TV news shows, we could not be able to discuss the issues well. People usually think that Television disrupt people's relationships and communications. However, when people can control themselves (주어 일치) to utilize Television in positive ways, people get more advantages, such as broadening perspectives or communicating with someone. Therefore, I disagree with the above statement. |
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1. 각 문단 시작 전에 tab 버튼 눌러서 들여쓰기 해주세요.
2. 문법에서는 in, to 등 전치사적 용법에 주의해주세요. 그리고 the 관사도 신경써서 꼭 붙여주세요.
문장 중간에 오는 단어는 (고유명사 제외) 반드시 all 소문자입니다.
3. 첫 번째도 socializing, 두 번째도 socializing이라 겹치는 느낌이 있습니다.
두 번째 문단은 아예 그냥 broadening perspectives에 포커스 했으면 좋았을 것 같아요.
수고하셨습니다. *^^*