■ Direction You have 20 minutes to plan and write your response. Your response will be judged on the basis of The quality of writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and the relationship to the reading passage. Typically, an effective response will be 150 to 225 words. ■ Question Summarize the points made in the lecture you just heard, explaining how they cast doubt on the points made in the reading
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▶ Your Answer : The lecturer
argues that we don’t know what is zebra stripes’ purpose. This contradicts the
reading passage’s claim that zebra stripes are tools for survival.
First of all,
the speaker argues that lion doesn’t catch a zebra by leaping. The speaker explains
that lion chases the zebra. (evidence가 하나도 언급이 안 되어 있습니다.) This casts doubt on the reading which states that zebra
stripes create an optical illusion, so lion can’t catch zebra by leaping.
In addition,
according to the speaker, predators can adapt overtime. The speaker maintains
that predators leaned how to pick out a zebra. This rebuffs the reading passage’s
assertion that zebra stripes confuse predators.
The final point
made by the lecturer is that zebras can’t hide themselves. The (대/소문자 구분) speaker says
that they expose themselves to the open plains. This refutes the reading
passage’s argument that zebra stripes serve as camouflage, so they cannot be
easily detected by predators. |
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1. introduction의 분량을 3문장 이상으로 늘려주세요.
2. body paragraph가 대체적으로 너무 짧은 편입니다.
reading & listening 등 자료에서 주어지는 evidence를 최대한 많이 잡아주세요.
디테일이 없으면 내용의 흐름도 알기 어렵습니다!
(300자 이상으로 쓰신다고 생각해주세요)
수고하셨습니다. *^^*