■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer |
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▶ Topic : It is better to take the most difficult and challenging classes in college or at university even if it means that you probably will not get top grades (marks) in them.
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▶ Your Answer :
There might be some people who believe that students should take difficult lecture at university although they could not have top grades. However, I completely disagree with the above idea for the two subsequent reasons. To begin with, these days, school marks are very important factor to get a job. Since there are too many students competing for jobs, they should not miss a single thing for their qualifications. If they got a low grade, it could be a big defect on their resume. It can be illustrated by a survey written by CEOs. It shows that a lot of employees and CEOs consider just how high their marks are, not what classes they took. What they really consider is the high grades. On top of that, too challenging lectures are not helpful for students. This is because it would be hard for them to understand and apply to their life. They cannot broaden their viewpoints towards the world and catch up with the depth of thoughts in the lecture. Let me bring up my personal story as an example. When I was a university student, I wanted to take a philosophy class because it looked (과거 시제로 맞춰줍니다) so cool to me. However, it was so profound to me to grasp at all. Finally, I not only got worst score, but also cannot make it useful for my life. Finally, I did not only get the worst score, but also make it useful for my life.
In conclusion, the idea is not good because students have to get high grades, and too difficult classes are not practical for student's (소유격) life. In this regard, I personally disagree with the statement that it is better to take most challenging classes in university even if students cannot get top grades in them.
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