■ Direction You have 20 minutes to plan and write your response. Your response will be judged on the basis of The quality of writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and the relationship to the reading passage. Typically, an effective response will be 150 to 225 words. ■ Question Summarize the points made in the lecture you just heard, explaining how they cast doubt on the points made in the reading
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▶ Your Answer :
In this lecture, the speaker argues that the solutions to the emerald ash borer problem are not viable. This counters the reading’s claim that there are several solutions to handle it.
First, the speaker points out that removing trees is not effective. This is because the detective symptoms appear in 1 to 2 years later and then, they must spread to adjacent trees. Also, if the affected trees are found, it is possible only in the urban area. In forest, there are too many trees and we cannot deal with them individually. This opposes the reading’s claim that identifying and removing affected trees are easy.
Second, the speaker maintains that using chemical treatment can be problematic. The application would result in ground water contamination and not work at trees that have too many larvae. This casts doubt on the reading’s claim that the chemical treatment would stop the adult insects laying their eggs by killing (동명사) them.
Lastly, the speaker contends that there are numerous issues to use wasps. The wasps survive only in cold winter region unlike these insects. Also, it could make unintended consequence like killing other types of insects. This rebuts the reading’s claim that the biological pest control with wasps can be effective to eliminate bores.
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1. 각 문단 시작 전에 tab 버튼 눌러서 들여쓰기 해주세요.
2. introduction의 분량을 3문장 이상으로 늘려주세요.
3. reading and listening의 비율이 너무 listening쪽으로만 치우쳐져 있습니다.
비율은 5:5, 적어도 6:4 정도는 되어야 합니다.
이는 리딩에 대한 디테일 부족으로 이어지며, 분량 부족, 추가 설명 실패 등으로 이어질 수 있으니
리딩에서도 evidence를 많이 찾아서 써주시면 좋을 것 같습니다.
4. 바디가 전체적으로 너무 짧은 편입니다.
4-5 문장 이상씩 늘려주세요.
5. 문법에서는 중요한 문장 성분이 빠져있는 경우가 많습니다.
검토를 꼼꼼히 하셔서 주어 혹은 동사가 빠졌는지 double check 해주세요.
수고하셨습니다. *^^*