▶ Your Answer :
Reading passage argues that the evidences
of Sinosauropteryx's feathers are not proven. However, the lecturer casts doubt
on the reading's contend. She says that these evidences represent
Sinosauroptyeryx must have feathers. contradicting three opinions shown by the passage
First, the lecturer contradicts the claim
of reading passage that the fine line of the dinosaur could be formed after the
death of them. She asserts that other fossils found in the same spot show they
have been preserved very well the fossils are well preserved. They were buried in volcanic ash so they don't
have any scar on the surfaces. do not have any scar on the surface (독립형 에세이에서는 줄인말을 서술하면 안됩니다)
Next, the speaker points out that the
assuming the fine lines as frills does not make sense. They have apparent
difference between the frills and feathers. When it comes to the composition,
feathers consist of amount of protein but frills are not. And most evidences
from scientific research point that would be feathers such things were feathers. This casts doubt on the
reading passage's claim that many scientists think that the fine lines are much
more likely to be the remains of frill should have been the remain of frill
Last, the professor argues that the
function of feathers is not limited on the flight and the use in
therm regulation. According to the reading passage, the lines of fossils show
that they located along the backbone and the tail, so it is not able to work as
the two function of feathers. But, during the lecture, she explains that it
could worked work (could 뒤에서는 동사 원형이 나와야 합니다) as the displayed function. For example, female picocks have a
colorful feathered tail in order to attract male picocks. So the feather of
Sinosauropteryx could work like that.
점수: 22 리딩에 대한 정보가 많이 부족한 통합형 에세이입니다. 통합형 에세이에서 가장 중요한 부분을 차지하는 것은 한 주제에 대하여서 서로 다른 정보를 가진 리딩과 리스닝이 어떻게 비교하고 반박을 하는 것인지를 보는 것 입니다. 지금 이 에세이 같은 경우에 있어서는 리딩에 대한 부분을 각 단락에서 한 문장으로만 서술하였는데. 한 문장으로 끝내는 것 보다는 리스닝을 좀 더 반박할 수 있는 부분들을 더 서술하시길 바랍니다 또한 리딩에 대한 정보가 뒤죽 박죽 나오는 경향이 있습니다. 수고많으셨습니다. |