▶ Your Answer :
Some people
think that criticism can be harmful for people to success in their work place.
However, in my opinion, accepting criticism have more benefits for people to success
in this society. There are two subsequent reasons.
To begin with,
accepting criticism and modifying their act can be experience for people and it
will be helpful for them. I believe experience is one of the essential factors
for success in this world. Imagine that people do not accept straight-word and
just do what they want to. Their view will be so narrow. By accepting others’
opinions and criticism, people can not only gain diverse experiences and broaden
their horizon of their field. For example, there was a poll conducted by Seoul
National University with 1000 employees, as respondents. The purpose of the
survey was to understand the consensus about important things for success in work
place. The majority of respondents ranked accepting other’s criticism over contending
one’s conviction without listening to other’s opinion. An overwhelming 75% of respondents
replied that admitting other’s criticism and correcting one’s act is crucial
factor for success in the work place. The reasons were mainly concerned with people
can be improve by getting experience that sometimes they may be wrong and
others can be right. This survey proves that most employees have a positive
view of accepting criticism.
On top of that,
to survive in this world of endless competition, people ought to admit their fault
and accept criticism. Being successful in the work place is like a camel
passing through the eye of needle nowadays. One’s ability can be clouded by
other’s abilities, so in order to stand out people must be able to improve
their acts by accepting criticism. To give an anecdote, my friends did not
listen other’s opinion when he worked at a company. He said that he is the
smartest person in his company, so other’s opinion is useless. However, he made
several mistakes and the company had trouble due to his fault. As a result, he
fired at his work place. Likewise, if people only believe one’s ability, they
might be failed at their work place.
To sum up, take the
importance of criticism for getting useful experiences and competitive nowadays
society into consideration, accepting criticism is required for people to success
in their work place. In this regard, I firmly hold that people who do not
listen and accept criticism would be failed at their job. |