| |
| |
|
Some people say that criticism is not good at success, due to people only get hurts. However, in my opinion, I think it is better that people will becoming more successful by being accepted many criticism. There is reason that today's our society is hyper-competetive, by being accepted other people's opinion, you can fix your wrong things and you create more networks in oerder to be successful.
To begin with, one can grow more and more by other's criticicm. It is crucial for people to sucess in this endless society nowadays. However, people usually do not mention any comment , moreover one doesn't listen carefully owing to be successful alone. If one hears about other people's criticisms more, also change one's own faults and missing point one will be firmly sucessful. To give an anecdote, my freinds soobin and joomin opened their shops at similar time. Soobin opened clothes shop, and she invited her friends to be given any advice of her shop. One of her professor said harsh criticism about placing clothes and prices. She almost cried hoever she accepted it. Moreover, her professor looked good gesture of her fixing, so the professor introduced soobin many other fashion designers. As a result, she had an dense relationship with fashion people, so her store had many unique and nice price products. On the other hand, joomin opened necklace shop, she didn't inviting any friends. Futhermore, she accepted no advice due to the fact that she thought her shop was perfect. Everyone was aware of the result of them. Soobin's store got fancy success and she opened second store near by her fisrt shop. Soobin says that "Had it not been for real criticism, I would not have been for success".
To sum up, by accepting another person's criticism, one can not only renovate one's own ability but also make a network with people that relates with the success. In this regard, I firmly believe that people who accept criticisms can be successful.