▶ Your Answer :
Some
people might think that in order to get good grades at school or at work, doing
additional extra work that is unnecessary is more effective. However, I believe
that participating actively in a group discussion is better. Apparently, the
two reasons are diversified, and I would like to scrutinize some of its
essentialities that are mentioned here.
First
and foremost, participating actively in a group meeting can motivate students.
To be specific, the students get to know people who speak better than them.
Then, the students want to deliver their opinions more accurately than those
people, so they put more effort on their works or performances. For example,
when I was in high school, I participated in a group discussion. Whenever I met
the friends who understand the context and deliver the opinion to others better
than me, I was frustrated and got motivated at the same time. Therefore, I
spent a lot of time to do for the group discussion and tried to make my opinion
more logically. As a result, I could get good performances at the speech
contest. In this sense, the group meeting can motivate students effectively.
On
top of that, doing additional extra work will be stressful to workers,
especially which is not necessary. These days, many companies pursue the norm
of 'work and rest balance', because they consider their leisure time is also
important as much as the work. Therefore, extra work only gives burdens to
workers, and this leads to devastate their health. For instance, my younger
brother wanted to adjust better in his workplace when he newly entered the
manufacture company. So, he did additional work in order to know the name of
the products. However, even though he worked hard, his over tiredness prevents
him from memorize those name, and he only got stress. In this regard, extra
works give only stress for workers.
In
a nutshell, I firmly believe that participating actively in a group discussion
motivates students and can prevent extra stress. It is my belief that my
argument regarding this topic has been precisely and efficiently delivered with
two reasons mentioned above. Hence, nothing in my mind overweighs my thought
stated above.
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