▶ Your Answer :
From a decision-making process, most of the
people probably went throw hasty situations. (Such as what situations?) Some of them might think they made
the right decision, and the while others might think they made a wrong decision. Even
more, some people could think they were able to make the right decision because
of the hasty situation. However, in my opinion, a fast decision-making process
would not give you the right solutions.
To begin with, there is not enough time to
consider problems. If you do not consider every option that you have to think
about, it will lead you to make a terrible decision, which make you to feel will probably
regret. For example, when I was the age of 19, I had a chance to go to the
other country. It looked like a great opportunity, but since I had to choose a
day, (What day?) I did not have a enough time to think about it. Therefore, I choose not to
go abroad for no reason, and I still regret that decision even nowadays. After that, when I took
the time to think carefully about the problem, I noticed that I could earn so
many benefits. I was able to see new things that I could not see during hasty
decision time.
On top of that, because of a limited time,
people easily feel insecure. It means that people cannot think in the right
way. (Why's that?) According to the article from “Joongang Ilbo”, skilled people in the
casino fake new people to make them nervous. (Who are skilled ones? Gamblers?) When people get nervous, they
easily lose their attention and make the wrong decisions. After they made making the
wrong choice, they suddenly notice that it was a bad choice at all. As you can
see in this example, people immediately notice their mistakes. But because of
the hasty situations, they’ve been through, they could not make the right
choice.
To sum up, people feel anxiety when they have get in a limited time. Also, in the decision-making process, there should be
enough time to consider. In this regard, I firmly believe that fast
decision-making could not lead you to the right decisions.
채점기준표 | Grammar | Contents | Example | Coherence | 점수 | 3 | 3
| 2 | 2 | Score | Fair 18-23 |
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