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Words alone cannot express the
importance of happy and satisfied life. One should not, however, fall prey to
the misconception that people in the past are living more unhappy and
unsatisfied life than nowadays. I, therefore, strongly believe that people in
the past are living more happy life than now. Firstly, these days, people are
living a really busy and hectic life. For example, students have to study more
than the past. This is because, population have been increased, so entering the
prestigious university is more difficult than before. Also, in job
opportunity, there are limitations about empty job opportunity. However, more
job finders make them to get hired hardly.
Also, the number of job seekers is increased
due to the increased population. Getting job became more difficult than before
because of the limited number of job opening. All of these examples demonstrate people
in modern society have lots of stress and they are living a restless life than
before. I think what higher stress level and less rest time mean is that the
modern people more unhappy and unsatisfied for quality of their lives. Secondly, I am sure that, in modern
society, a criteria of happiness is higher than before. In the past, most of
people always lived with deficient materials and lack of foods. They were
really happy if the get just many foods as an example. On the other
hand, nowadays, we have plenty resources such as food and money. Higher
technologies also always in around us. Thanks to these abundant
circumstances, a foundation of human life have been satisfied. In
result, a criteria of peoples' happiness has been got higher than
before. Whereas they are clearly living under the affluent conditions, they
do not realize that they are happy. People just want to get more things that
they did not have and they feel they are not happy.
As I mentioned above, people in the past
lived more happily life. The importance of living a happy life in our society
can never be overestimated. So I would like to urge people wake from the
illusion that, these days, people are living a more happy life. I would not
think twice before choosing to do so. |