Topic : Some
people think that a person gains more benefit by traveling in his or her own
country. Other people think that it is more beneficial for a person to travel
abroad. Which do you think is better?
Some
people think that traveling inside the home land is the best way to get more
benefits. However, in my opinion, I strongly believe that the statement above is
so untrue because of challenging and learning foreign languages.
First and foremost, traveling abroad is a
good way to challenge myself. Unlike traveling in mother land, it can be a
great adventure to go outside the country. To be specific, I can learn how to
survive in foreign country under the exotic surroundings and uncommon languages.
Through this experience, I will be able to widen my perspective and become more
independent. For instance, when I first went abroad alone for travel, I did not (줄임말 사용을 지양해주세요) know how to manage myself properly. However, during two (아라비아 숫자 사용을 하지 말아주세요) weeks of wandering in
foreign country, I learned how to deal with strange situations and got used to
fitting in. It was a precious experience that made me stronger than before.
Furthermore, traveling other countries is
effective to learn foreign languages. In the advent of global era, the language
skill becomes more important than before. Thus, it is essential to practice
foreign languages as frequently (품사) as possible through going abroad. Moreover,
traveling can motivate us to learn new languages from countries that we want to
visit. According to the well-known Korean socialist, when people have an
experience of going abroad, they can accomplish the goal of learning other
languages effectively. The socialist also suggests that if people opt for
staying only in their country, it generally takes longer to achieve the same
foreign language level as people from former group.
In a nutshell, traveling overseas (철자 오류) can be a
perfect experience to challenge myself. Also, it adamantly motivates people to
learn new languages. There is no doubt in my mind that it is a huge advantage
to travel abroad, compared to exploring inside my own country.
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