▶ Your Answer : As the industry
develops, so do the electronic devices, especially smart phone. Therefore, To
begin with, using internet comes in handy, for in anywhere, anytime people can
use it. The majority of people are using it. So, they can access the internet
in anywhere, anytime due to the fact that it is weightless and portable. On
the other hand, relatively books or printed things are heavy and big, so these
are restricted to carry around. My personal experience is compelling example of
this. When I did research about the lion, I needed a lot of information of lion.
So, I went to library to find the resources. Unfortunately, but other person
already had rented a zoology dictionary, I did not have ways to find the data
for research. My father knew the situation and bought a smartphone for me.
Since, smartphone is small and convenient, I could know about the lion in
anywhere, anytime. As a result, I got good grade in research part. If I waited the books instead of using internet, I could not even start the project. On top of that, by
using computer people can save the earth, for it prevents to cut off the trees.
According to research conducted by Seoul University, more than 25% of Amazon’s
forests are reducing each year due to the fact of relentless cutting of wood
which is a main source of imprinted materials. So, the one solution is to use online unimprinted materials instead of paper. My country, Korea, will support the ideal.
Korean government knew the serious fact earlier than other countries. So they
implemented the new project which is replace all paper textbook to tablet pc.
At the first time, many citizens were upset of it, but as time passed by, they knew this
project is helpful for their future and support the idea. Consequently, Korea
became a number one country of cleanliness. If my land did not replace a paper with a to
computer, Korea will suffer from pollution.
Thus, it is fair
to conclude that I disagree with the statement that imprinted materials are better
than online study materials on the Internet. This is because it is more comfortable to carry around and help
to preserve the nature.
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