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Some people might think that the most influential factor on
teenagers is a friend. Admittedly, children are easily mimic each other, thus
people might think that children can have the greatest influence on their peer
children. However, in my opinion, there are several important factors which can
have more significance on teenager’s development, such as teachers and parents.
Teachers are professional on correcting student’s behavior and parents can have
more influence on their children than peer children can do.
To begin with, when it comes to the role of teachers, they are
professionals in correcting teenager behaviors. To be specific, to become a
teacher, people have to be highly educated about children’s development, their behavior,
and even how to correct them. It means that teachers how to make an influence
on their in efficient way. (무슨 뜻인지 문장 전체 해석이 힘듭니다) Even if a child might learn some bad behaviors form his
or her friends, his or her teacher may not allow the children to do such behaviors.
In this case, it is suggested that teacher have higher influence on children’s
behavior than peer children do. For example, I have a (관사 필요합니다) friend who is an elementary
school teacher. When she studied in the educational college, she was trained about
a variety (품사 -> 명사) of subjects with regards to children’s behaviors. Once she told me
that she knows very well about psychology to their physiology of children so
that she can easily correct bad behaviors of her kids. This professional knowledge
is exclusively provided by teachers. Thus, I think that teacher can have the (최상급 관사 the) greatest
influence on their children than any other one (any other 단수)
On top of that, it is frequently
observed that a parent tries to correct their kid’s behavior. According to the
given argument, teenagers are often influenced by their friend. However, parents
can have a greater impact on their kids because, living together, teenagers learn
the basic attitudes of life at home and parents try to teach good etiquettes to their children. Parents educate their children to do not commit bed behaviors.
Even if a child learned some bed habits from peers, his or her parents can correct
the bad action. This suggest that parents have stronger influence on their child
rather than peers. For example, I had a younger brother. Once, he hung (과거 시제) out
with bullies in my town, about which my parent were worried. However, my parents
did their best to teach him what good behavior is and he became get better. I
think that his bad friends did not have any negative influence on my brother
because of my parents. Without my parent, my brother might have become a rude
person. Thus, I think that the most influential person in his life is my mother.
To sum up, teachers can effectively have an influence on teenagers by
emphasizing their professional knowledge on child development and parents have
stronger influence on their kids because they have more affection on their
kids. In this regard, I think that teachers and parents have more influence on teenagers
rather than their friends do. |