■ Direction You have 20 minutes to plan and write your response. Your response will be judged on the basis of The quality of writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and the relationship to the reading passage. Typically, an effective response will be 150 to 225 words. ■ Question Summarize the points made in the lecture you just heard, explaining how they cast doubt on the points made in the reading
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▶ Topic :
Which is the best way to increase confidence when you do the task through discussion 1. prepare a lot 2. learn and practice techniques 3. get an advice from other people
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▶ Your Answer :
Some people think that people should get an advice or prepare a lot to gain confidence in discussion time. However, in my opinion, learning techniques needed for discussion is the best way to gain confidence through discussion. This is because techniques help people suggest their idea clearly and do work efficiently. To begin with, by developing searching techniques, I can access a lot of information quickly. Acquiring information quickly is important because I can suggest better ideas based on the information. If I can make good ideas during a discussion session, I can become more confident. For instance, when I worked at Samsung Electronics in South Korea as a manager, I had a meeting with many employees for a business strategy.I could tell them my idea about a business plan since I utilized the searching engine such as Google, Naver, and Daum. Because I could search the data related to the plan quickly and concisely, It seemed that my logic was perfect. As a result, I was able to develop confidence. Through this experience, I realized that the importance of searching skills in a short time in discussion.
On top of that, thanks to communication skills, I can complete my task more efficiently. If I finish my task in a short time, I can feel a sense of accomplishment and become a confident person. However, if (대소문자 구분) I do not have great communication skills, I would not be able to do the task quickly due to disagreement with other persons, and fail to produce a positive outcome. It leads to a collapse in confidence. For example, when I was a sophomore in high school, I had a hard time because I did (시제 -> 과거) not have communication skills. I thought the after-school class was important and I was trying to convince other students to take the class together. But (but 뒤에 컴마 오지 않습니다) they disagree with my idea and it (대소문자 구분) made me feel frustrated and I could not become confident. However, I could overcome my problems because I was trying to acquire many skills such as listening to others' opinion, suggesting my idea logically, and preparing many options. I was able to enjoy the discussion time because we discussed our problem in a constructive way. As a result, we took the class together and we got good grades in all academic subjects. Had it not been for the communication skills, I would not have been able to convince others.
To sum up, by using techniques, people can make their idea clear and do work efficiently. In this regard, I firmly believe that learning techniques needed for discussion is most important in enhancing confidence. |
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세개 중에서 고르는 문제가 나올 때, 나머지 두개에 대해서도 언급해야 하나요?
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1. conclusion의 분량을 3문장 이상으로 늘려주세요.
2. 사소한 문법 오류가 잦은 편입니다. proof-reading을 꼼꼼하게 해주세요.
3. 3개가 나오면 선택한 1개에 대해서 바디 하나를 쓰고 나머지 2개를 묶어서 바디 1개를 쓰는 것이 좋습니다.
아니면 굳이 언급 없이 선택한 1개에 대해서 바디 2개를 쓰되 나머지 2개도 살짝만 건드려주면 득점 포인트가 올라갑니다.