▶ Your Answer : The consensus seems to be that many people don’t want to move to a new city. However in my opinion, I think It's better to move to the new place. Because you can keep in touch with the old friends through social media.They can also introduce new friends in the new area. To begin with, with the development of smart-phone you can easily get in touch with your friends. In fact many people can usually interact with the friends all over the nation through their social network service. It’s very easy and cheap way to contact According to the survey which is conducted by the university of Pittsburgh to determine whether the far distance can really affect their relationships. The researcher formed a group of 200 students who moved to the new city. they were asked to complete the questionnaire about what can really have an impact on their friend relationships. The result was so intriguing that grabbed worldwide attention. An overwhelming 77% of the participants replied that the distance is no longer matter to disrupt the bonds. they also responded that with the development of social media such as instagram and facebook. they can easily contact with each-other at no cost. they also chat about many common interest all day long through the program. A large number of people already knew what can be a detrimental effect on their relationships is their low willingness to contact. On top of that, old friends can introduce new friends in the city. So they can broaden their social relationships through their old friends. What I mean is that many people in the urban city was moved from the rural and pastoral areas. So if I move to the area they can also introduce their friends. I’ll illustrate my experiences to explain this point. When I was high school student, our family had to move to the rural area due to a lot of debts. So I told my situation to Jang who is my closest friend. However the city I would move to was his hometown. So he could introduce me a lot of his friends through e-mail. Thankfully i can easily adapt to the new area. A couple of years later Jang could visit our city. So we could make such a great memory in the city. We could see a beautiful lake and spent time day and night. As such the distance was no longer the problem to think about. They are still very close with the far distance. Also we can make intimate relationships with them. In a nutshell, With the development of social media we can easily get in touch with the friends and widen our social relationships through the old friends who can introduce you a lot of his friends. In this regard i think the statement that farther distance can be a hassle for your friendships are nothing could be farther from the truth.
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