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Some people believe that having many choices is a positive aspect, while others think that it is a troublesome work. It is true that we have nowadays there are (이렇게 바꾸면 1인칭의 불필요한 사용을 막을 수 있죠.) too many choices, but I would argue that having lots of choices provide women, children, and teenagers diverse positive opportunities.
To begin with, recently, there has been less discrimination against class and gender. In other words, every people living in modern times can get a job they want. In the past, there there were some was some kind of jobs which could have only males could have such as a politician, a doctor and a construction worker. However, these days, women also can have these this sort of jobs if they want. For example, many high school girls these days usually choose various majors without any restrictions. In reality, the percentage of female students who choose various majors like engineering, architecture or medical science is increasing steadily. This would probably have been impossible if they did not have many choices as before.
In addition, having many choices means having various opportunities. If children are faced with many choices people are faced with many choices when they were children, they would have gain useful experiences and knowledge and they might discover their hidden talents during the process of making a decision. In Korea, most children and teenagers usually study at several types of private institutes from English and Science to Art and Music (예외의 경우가 있긴 한데, 원칙적으로는 얘네가 고유명사는 아니므로 소문자 시작해주시는 게 맞긴 합니다.). Although some people say that this is a heavy workload, I believe that being exposed to many choices and getting a variety of opportunities helps them to find their dreams of the future.
To conclude, sometimes although it may be difficult to choose one from a variety of options, but I think that having many choices helps improve people's lifestyle and diversity.
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