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Nowadays, although many people are suffering from
housing issues, conservation of trees is much more significant than the
development of housing. Thus, I firmly believe that people should put more importance
on planting tee trees in the city than providing housing, and the reasons are as
below.
First of all, many trees in towns and cities can have
positive effects on people’s environment. It is because they can purify the air
which is probably harmful with chemicals and contaminated by pollution. For
example, it is true that plants such as trees release oxygen to the air and
absorb the carbon dioxide, which is created by human. The point Point is that this can
make the air more clean through the chain reactions that help aerodynamically help the stream of atmosphere to be flexible. In addition, this purified air would
help some animals to make clean condition under the water too (동물들'이' 컨디션을 좋게 만드는데 이바지하는 건지, 아니면 동물들'의' 컨디션을 좋게 만드는 건지 정확하게 밝혀주셔야 할 것 같습니다.) .
Second, if there are many trees in the city, it can
educationally affect the young. It could provide students with opportunities for
education. For example, students experience a field trip on these sites because
they can study and learn the species of tree, plant’s metabolism, which is
called photosynthesis, and research on specimens that collected from trees (파란 부분을 A, 초록 부분을 B 라고 봤을 때, 현재 A 때문에 B이다. 라는 다소 중의적이고 애매한 구조로 문장이 이루어져있습니다. 이보다는 A로 인해 B라는 이점을 얻을 수 있다 등으로 수정해주세요~).
These activities probably could be done in the circumstances with many trees.
To sum up, it is impossible to exaggerate the fact
that many trees should be planted in open are and cities because the
possibilities of making a clean environment and giving students related education the educations.
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