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The table below shows the total number of people who visited
Ashdown Museum. The pie chart shows the results of surveys that present how
satisfied visitors are.
Looking at the table more closely, the number of visitors is
74,000 before a the museum was refurbished. However, after refurbishment, the
number of visitors increased to 92,000.
The survey results indicate visitor’s satisfaction which has
five different categories. (이 문장의 본질은 앞에서 이미 했던 말이므로 현재 이 문장은 크게 의미를 갖지 않습니다.) Before refurbishment of the museum, the proportion
of dissatisfaction by visitors was high, presented as 40%. Satisfaction shows
30% and the sum of the other categories, very satisfaction, no response, and
very dissatisfaction shows 30%. By contrast, the rate of satisfaction increases
to 40%, and that of dissatisfaction decrease to 15% after refurbishment.
Additionally, the percentage of very satisfaction grows more than twice
compared to before refurbishment. As for both very dissatisfaction and no
response, the sum of their percentage fall to 10% in comparison with 15% before
refurbishment. (어쨌든 과거의 사건이므로 과거형으로 적어주세요~)
가장 코멘트를 많이 받았던 task1입니다ㅜㅜ 쓸떄 마다 두렵네요. 시험이 2주 남아서 첨삭을 자주 더욱 자주 부탁 드리게 될 것 같습니다. 항상 감사 드립니다.
A: 시험이 2주밖에 남지 않았군요ㅠㅠ혹시 목표하시는 점수가 몇 점인가요? Task 1의 비중이 상대적으로는 적기 때문에 Task 1을 잘 쓰자라는 생각보다는 이쪽에서 최소한의 감점만 당하고 Task 2에서 승부 보는 전략도 괜찮긴 한데...여튼 항상 파이팅입니다 :)
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