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Some people think that the superb best method to get a job which earns a lot of money is getting a certification of university graduation. However, others insist that the best way to get a great job is to experience experiencing and developing some skills is a better way (이렇게 작성하면 불필요한 반복을 막을 수 있게 됩니다.). Both views will be discussed, however, While both view will be discussed, it is my belief that the former view is more persuasive.
On the one hand, there are arguments that developing skills and having a lot of experiences are of great benefit to get a good job. First of all, some occupations such as safety guard do not need a diploma. For instance, there is a job which is carrying construction material like cement by driving fork crane in the places where introduce a building need to get a truck driver license. The need for qualification of this job is not a diploma, but a license of driving special vehicle such as fork crane. Secondly, attending the university is the waste of money and time. If people attend the university in order to get a dream job in the future, they abandoned their tuition fee and the time during 4 years. This is because they could get a variety of experience in various areas and a lot of license by using their tuition fee and time. Many university are focused on teaching academic knowledges to their students, as learning university’s education is less effective to get a job. (대학교에 가는 게 시간낭비인 것이 '경험과 스킬 개발하는 것이 좋은 직업을 획득하는데에 있어 도움이 된다' 라는 주장에 대한 근거가 될 수 없습니다. 그저 '대학교에 가는 것이 좋은 직업을 획득하는데에 도움이 된다' 라는 주장을 반박할 때 사용할 수 있는 근거일 뿐이에요.)
On the other hand, in my view, certification of university graduation is really helpful to get a job which earns lots of money. One of the main reasons is that the majority of corporation in our society want their employees who have a get a diploma of university. In reality, it is not open a big opportunity to get a good job for people who graduate high school in present time (여기는 어떤 의미로 적어주셨나요? 댓글 주시면 확인하고 수정해드리겠습니다.). Another main reason can be that getting knowledge from their professors in their university is can be of great help while people are working. For example, people who studied the subject of business in university learn about business skill, these knowledges would be useful while they working in a common company. (이건 앞의 문장을 의미없이 분량 채우기로 반복한 것에 불과합니다. 구체적으로 어떠한 방식으로 도움이 되는지 등에 대해 적어주세요.)
As mentioned above, it seems to me that there are several positive aspects that getting various experiences and developing skills instead of getting a diploma of university. However, I believe that there are more opportunity to get a good job when lots of people have to get a certification of graduation in university. |