◆ Delivery (Pronunciation and Intonation)
- bombard발음이 부정확합니다.
- 발음이 뭉치지 않게 조심해주세요.
◆ Language Use (Grammar and Vocabulary)
- people are bombard
-> people are bombarded
- to respond all thing
-> to respond to all things
- it also have a risk
-> it also has a risk
- they can could ignore
-> they could ignore
- an advertisement in internet
-> advertisements on the internet
- too many information
-> too much information
◆ Topic Development (Contents)
- 전체적으로 구조가 잘 잡혀있습니다.
- 주요 포인트가 언급되어있고 설명이 잘 되어있습니다.
◆ Comments
- 문법 실수가 여럿 있으니 주의해주세요.
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